Thursday, October 13, 2011

50 words or less essay

King Aegeus wanted a son so future generations would remember him. His first wife died and his second wont have children. He saw a sorceress and begged for a son. She told him the next time he hugged a woman she would have a child. Theseus was born.
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  1. AnonymousOctober 16, 2011 at 9:17 PM

    You did a good job but you have a little part at the end you would like to fix that part

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  2. AnonymousOctober 16, 2011 at 9:26 PM

    Sara, the first sentence is not bad but there is no such thing as King Atheus.The king didn't see the sorceress, the Oracle told him to go see her.
    you need to make sure you understand the story properly.

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